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The Betrayal - Chapter 2

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(Olivia Lilith)

Wow, who turned up the heat, I thought as I sat next to my Aunty Fila. I moaned suddenly let out a loud moan hoping that the meeting would just freaking end. Taking my eyes of the maroon colored cracked floor, I looked up and started reading through minds.

Yep that's what I said. I can read minds. Awesome right?

No, sometimes people won't shut up; they are either plotting something evil or groveling to me. Ugh, its sooo boring, how do they even stand their own thoughts.

'I wish those human's still lived, I'd rip……'                                  

'Blood, ooooo, so good'

'Hey Lil Liv'

That thought caused me to focus; only one person called me that. Daniel. Ugh, he'd become attached to me when he'd first seen me, claiming to be mine. Damn hell he annoyed me.

See what I said there, yeah that's right, I'm in hell , just didn't seem appropriate to say good hell or good heaven, or damn Satan, since well my dad Satan was dead and already dammed, so I was stuck with damn hell.

Had a nice ring to it don't you think?

Sighing, I finally settled down on my Aunt's thoughts. Having nothing to do while I sat in my grand chair, I flicked my long wavy light brown hair over my shoulder and began to inspect my newly painted blood red nails.

I think they looked quite hot and trust me you'd agree. They also matched what I was wearing. Damn I was working it.
'How do I approach this', I heard my Aunt Fila think. Her usually scrambled thoughts where nicely laid out.

'It must be done, weather she's bothered or not, I will not let her keep sitting her lazy royal ass on her embodied chair, acting like a spoilt brat. She has a part to play, and it's time'. With that thought she seemed to make up her mind.

"Princess Olivia Lilith, your time has come".

Realizing that wasn't a mere thought, I opened my eyes which I realized had been closed as I'd focused on her thoughts.

"Yes Aunty?" I finally replied, not use to being called on during the demon council meeting. Usually I just had to be present.

"Whatever do you mean", I said confused; her thoughts had reviled nothing.

"You are a Royal, and with the passing of your mother and father, now that you are old enough your time has come".

I closed my eyes, refusing to let anyone see through my boundaries of pain. Yes, my parents were dead, and I lived. That realization always brought me to tears. I wouldn't dare cry in front of these people, not now, not ever.

"Since you are at your becoming of age", she continued "Things must take place, in order for you to inherit your throne. When your mother was foretold to bore a child, she made me promise one thing, seeming to know her fate.

She said 'Fila, if I am not to make it through my child's birth, promise me you will watch over her.' I vowed I would and so I shall".

Knowing my mother's death was my fault still haunted me everyday, and my pain of an aunt kept bringing up her death. I opened my eyes and faced her, when she finally got to the point and said. "To inherit your throne you must first marry someone of my choosing".

The whole room went silent at that decree, as my pale cream colored face went white.

I was bloody eighteen. See what I did there. 'Bloody', come on you got to laugh at that. Fine be bloody up tight. See what I did there.

Anyway that wasn't the big point the point was me getting married. I didn't need an arrogant man to rule. Damn it, I was going to bloody fight this. See, I did it again.

"On this day, I proclaim that you be married to Daniel".

I gasped. Had I heard that right, no? He was hardly a boy, not even a man or one I would marry. He was degrading to demon humanity. Never would I stoop so low. "WHAT!!" I suddenly yelled frantically.

To my right I heard an arrogant voice yell out "YES"

"You shall also kill your first Phoenix, and we are saving their lowly prince for you", she continued like I hadn't said a thing.
That last statement brought a smile to my prominent lips. I'd been asking for an opportunity to kill one of the Hybrids as revenge for my father's death.

My time had come but, I'd rather be damned to hell (which I already was, it's quite nice, needed a spa though) before I married Daniel. He made a flying unicorn look more demonic and he was a freaking demon. I'm serious just his hair is a violation and his face was so difunctional. Overall he was an epic fail.

I shook my head aspirated but holding a spark of hope that I would crush the Phoenix Prince they called David. Unable to be in the same room as my aunt and my newly supposed fiancé I walked out of the room to go and break something to sustain my anger so I didn't kill a demon.

The beauty of hell; destroying something is always referred to as remodeling so I was going to 'remodel' my quarters. I might also 'remodel' someone's face on the way there; damn I loved hell, so fun.
Heres part two! enjoy I hope it makes you laugh a bit :) Please comment.

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AliceKKT's avatar
I like it, but if she's a princess, and in high-society, you might want to tone their language down a bit.
Sure you can damn hell and all, but just tone the rest down.
And also the parts where you "talk", let's say, to the reader didn't come to my appeal.
You definitely have talent, but I would say progressing talent.
You can't be perfect when you start, and I'm not saying I am.
Just know your characters first.
That way, you can have your readers know them too.
Everything you write about them reflects on their personality.
Hope this helps :)