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Discouraging Petals Of Love

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Every torn petal kills me softly...
This is for the :iconsixwordstories: mini contest. Its about when I use to pick daisy petals and i didn't get my desired result oh it was so annoying. But fun at the same time :P


PS Llamas much Appreciated & Watches & Faves & Comments

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3wyl's avatar
I really like how you've approached the concept, because it feels like such a roundabout way of saying it, what with the metaphors and all of that.. but then again, if you know what this is about, it becomes less so, and even though I said it's roundabout, it's not a bad thing at all. :shrug:

You could put a full stop at the end of the sentence... other than that, awesome piece. :nod: