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A Disagreement

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"Never!" he says, just as a crackling sound ripples through the air. He slapped me! I rush at him, anger lighting up my face. Even as he stumbles back, I advance. Suddenly he stops as his back presses against the far wall. His eyes dart around like a trapped animal, searching for escape. I lunge at him and come face to face...with the wall. I push away from it and turn towards my...prey. Collected and ready on the other side of the room.

With his fists balled, he looks to be in a battle stance. I stand up straight and diligently walk towards him. He cocks his head to the side, thrown off by my sudden decorum. He lets his guard down, lowering his fists. Exactly what I want. I smile snidely at him and dive towards him, sure of my victory. His face falls at a sudden understanding. But too late. I am on him in a millisecond.

I stare him down, still mad by the fact he'd slapped me. My cheek still pulses. As much as I want to reconstruct his face. I keep my composure and smile warmly at him. When I have caught my breath, I finally say "Would you like a cup of tea?" He resignedly sighs with defeat and gives a solemn nod of compliance.

He really doesn't like tea.
Well I wanted to write something random and funny XD hope you like it:)

PS Llamas much Appreciated & Watches & Faves

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Tintinnabuli's avatar
The characters in this very short piece are interesting. I'm curious to know what compels one away from tea, and why the other character feels the right to impose tea drinking upon him. I feel like this would make an good, longer, short story. More character, more ridiculous tea antics. What does this fellow's face look like when he takes a sip of tea? Does he have any tricks to subdue his distaste? The opposition between these two seem silly enough to warrant my attention. :D

A few minor typos: Lung = lunge, breathe = breath

Tea is a wonderful thing though, and it's a fact that, like in the story, it can stop somebody from punching another person in the face.
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